Journal 21/2/12

We got feedback from the rest of the class after they watched our title sequence. Some of the feedback was:

• generally positive - mostly three stars and some two stars
• They liked a lot about the video such as typography, storyline, music, quick cuts
• We could improve it by trying out some slow motion on parts and speeding other parts up
• making some of the quick cuts slightly longer so as not to confuse the audience too much

we have taken all of these into consideration and have tried out slow motion and made the fast cuts a little bit slower - though not too slow.